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It was a hot afternoon, around 3:30 pm
I went to the park to get you off my head
I looked at the children who played and ran
Their faces glistened with happyness and joy
I saw an empty swing about 5 feet afar
I approached to it and started to remember
How you and I used to walk together
I sat down and looked at the sky
While I feel a slight breeze on my face
I lift my feet and start to swing
And remembering all the things we went through
Good times and bad times
I closed my eyes as I swinged higher
Feeling like I was flying away from this world
I started remembering how you used to hold my hand
And hold me in your arms when I started to cry
Remembering how we used to laugh about things
That never really mattered for a fact
Remembering those days when we used to hang out
Have lots of fun, have lots of happyness
I suddenly remembered when you layed on a bed
Very sick and hurt as I looked down at your face
My eyes full of tears and your hand upon my cheek
Begging me to please not cry, that everything will be fine
I suddenly fell off the swing, as raindrops fell upon me
I looked around the park, everyone was gone
And that's when I noticed that I was swinging under the rain
I didn't know where I was for a slight second
For I was absorded into those memories about you and me
I stood up and saw the whole park soaked with rain
I started to go and looked at the sky one last time
Lighting crossed through the sky as tears rolled down my face
And the only thing left, were memories of you inside my head.
:iconkenddraphantom:

Author's Comments

Holy crap....huge poem @___@''

Anyhow, this is something that actually did happen. Yes, this is my first attempt to doing a poem so I know it sucks, don't rub it in please. ^^;

EDIT: This poem is in memory of a childhood best friend. I loved him so much...but...at least he is in a better place now. :crying:

Poetry (c) ~KenddraPhantom

Dont steal or use. Thank you.

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:icondflo75:
Awww... It's not that bad. Matter of fact, it's a pretty decent poem!
It seems like a childhood memory, like something that was reminiced a few years back. This is not at all bad, Keni. Pretty good for your first time at poetry! :D

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:iconkenddraphantom:
Lol, thank you. :) Well, it ain't a childhood memory. It's something that happened today. You see, a friend of mine died today and well this is something in his memory. :( Aww, thank you. ^.^:tighthug:

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Don't care what you do or where you go
Just want you to know that even if
It hurts a great deal, these memories,
They will long be kept inside of me.
So you can go on with your life and such,
But don't cry because it's over
Smile because it happened.
:icondflo75:
Aw, I'm sorry. I didn't know hon.
Are you doing ok? :hug:

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Oh yea, yea, yeaaaaaah, baby, Audi 5000,PEACE!!! - The end of Tevin Campbell's song entitled "Just ask me to."
:iconkenddraphantom:
I know, I know. I didn't say anything till now. :( Yeah, I'm doing fine...just...missing him. :(

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Don't care what you do or where you go
Just want you to know that even if
It hurts a great deal, these memories,
They will long be kept inside of me.
So you can go on with your life and such,
But don't cry because it's over
Smile because it happened.
:icondflo75:
:hug:

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Oh yea, yea, yeaaaaaah, baby, Audi 5000,PEACE!!! - The end of Tevin Campbell's song entitled "Just ask me to."
:iconangelic-1ove:
OMG, this is so gr8 sis, yet so sadd... did u 2 share like a close relationship? Wow, sis... I never knew u were a gr8 peot, may ur friend rest in peace...
:sadangel:

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:iconkenddraphantom:
Thanks, sis. :hug: Yeah, we were pretty close...Thanks Jen. :tighthug:

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Don't care what you do or where you go
Just want you to know that even if
It hurts a great deal, these memories,
They will long be kept inside of me.
So you can go on with your life and such,
But don't cry because it's over
Smile because it happened.
:iconprincessbetty1:
:tears: This poem has definitely connected my heart, sis! Really! I'm sure he loves you as you love him back in a way others could not understand except you, him, and God. There is no other words to describe this. :clap: :huggle:

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:iconk8y411:
:heart: :cling:
that was beautifully written i could feel the emotion in it. :hug:

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